I have posted a couple of raw guitar/vocal demos at...
Songramp .
A song on there, "Questions"... just wondering what people think of this song. Man, I have written so many songs but I dunno, when a melody keeps running through my mind, that's a good sign. But I cannot be objective. I've had this hook "questions for Dad" flying around in my mind for like two years. A song finally came to me. But I ended the song with "questions for Mom," as well, as I thought it would be a better song if some "hope" or good news ended the song. Rather than just regret.
I'm trying to write the best songs I can, to appeal to the most people. Like a professional songwriter would strive for. Because I want to pitch songs to publishers. Odds are one in a million but I'm going to try.
So, if you have any opinion, yay or nay, about the commercial potential of this song, thanks. And you won't hurt my feelings, I have hundreds of songs, so I favor an honest opinion. Thanks!
P.S. There is a song on there "Daily Bread." Just a whimsical song, I had no intent for it to be anything more than a song for a friend. His daughter, Lilly had a praying mantis and a bird ate it. I wrote a silly song about it. Heck, it's almost like a children's song except I guess you don't write about "the pet gets killed" for kids.
Very raw demos.